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Old 05-04-03, 08:34 AM   #5
Mental God
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i know you my boy, but choosin me to battle got you in deep\\
cause ur rhymes is like an old dog, need to be put to sleep\\
i know this is ur first battle, and you new to this whole site\\
but the time it take you to write a verse, is longer than an international flight\\
ur technique aint unique, it just so outplayed, that no one usees it anymore\\
its like the off brands of cereal, that you can buy at the grocery store\\
u wanna see how hard an erection can be? here, just open your jaw\\
i'll have you see'in more dicks than if you were in an all male spa\\
you use alot of metaphors, but how many even make sence\\
cause i get lost readin them, you have so many condensed\\
its just like 20 mexicans living in a little 2 room shack\\
packed in so tight they cant move, havin anxiety attacks\\
we went over the border, and smoked out a mushroom cloud\\
but since you are mexican, when we tried to get back over you werent allowed\\
they put you in a mexican jail, were you met your boyfriend tito\\
and now every single night, you suck sour cream out his burrito\\
its fuckin 3 30 in the morning, and my eyes are half closed\\
cause i didnt know castillo would post, right when the battle was imposed\\
he sure has energy, now thats what i call a hyped up newbie\\
too bad he spends all his time watching generic rappers on MTV\\
well im off to bed, so i can get sleep, and dream about whatever\\
i didnt write that much, but im pretty sure castillo wont get any votes whatsoever\\
goodnight little punk, you just got merked? can you tell me how it feels?\\
"well i dont think it was fair, lets take it to the court of appeals"

that was the worst shit i have ever written, but it IS almost 4 IN THE MORNING!!!!!!!! lmao night uppin fr this