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you should have structured it like this
man i spit so good looking like i commited a crime/
poeple trying 2 excuse me of being busta WITH MORE ryhmes/
but im only a 13ad {habbit} thats how i do/
man stop trying 2 bust boi its hurting u/
im the new kid on the block here in the site/
i c u over there bustin on me tryin 2 bite/
but every time i get u on its the lock down/
u sound like a broke down snoop dowg wit out the sound/
bring u bac turn ur rymhes ^ side down /
now im not only new im here for u now giv it a holla/
im leaaving strollin poppin my colla
your whole verse is wack you should post this in the wackness center people will help you there. you have no flow and the topic is played. dont rap about being the best unless you are.
keep elevating though dont quit,
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