dawg dis was short, vocab was limited, their was next 2 no elavting, but their was iight flow.

make yo shit longer, elavate use bigger words and varied words, but keep da flow going, dis shit is tuff man, i hope to see some dope shit from u fosure soon, keep writin.

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cheak dat out dawg, much luv