kid aint gonna improve with peeps bringing him down

but he is right man you are too simple

you have a potential...how long ya been spitting for????

if u made ya lines abit longer and through in some multie's n shyt and upped ya vocab to make it abit more complex then it'd be tight

also try thinking of a topic nah mean if you just get a topicand make it a deep one then more people will read it

keep elevating man and fuck the hate just keep ya head up and stay humble pz