IP:
but this time was different you knew it was the last
as you heard the door slam and the car engine clash
my mother was crying, tears pouring rapidly
she was on the floor laying, calling him the enemy
nice imagery there...
word choice was barely
off in some segments..
content was amazing..
good job..glad to see
you writing...keep it up!
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