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IP:
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Armageddon, oh my god!
This is Camarac, i remember
you showed me the ropes
when i first joined here!
SHIT! Anyways, great piece
you have here, a couple of
the bars were a little short
and threw the flow a little,
nice imagery though, a few
more multi's, internals and
externals and this would be
better, but as it is, its a pretty
stand out piece, i enjoyed
reading it. Good drop 'Don.
Holla at my piece, see if ive improved!
Peace!
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