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Old 05-05-03, 05:14 PM   #14
G.Hod
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FLOW: Billy, by far.. Work on that, Ruthless.
PUNCHES: Billy's hit harder; more witty.
MULTIS: Ruthless, although they threw off the flow.
METAS: Tied
WORDPLAY: Billy
VOTE: Billy

Although Ruthless had some very nice multi's, and a handful of punches, Billy's really impressed me.. You've gotten a lot better in the past few weeks, kid.

HIGHLIGHTS:

BILLY

Upon Your Defeat I’ll Get “Paid” With Respects But “Win-Frey” Like Oprah/ (Win-Free)
If There Was A Deck Of “Cards” On A Girls “Pussy” U Still Couldn’t “Poker”/ (Poke Her)

First line was very creative, but you could have finished much better with the second..

This Cat Can “Smell” Defeat, I'm Givin Him the “Worst Rank”/
He’ll “Live On” After This Battle Only By A Donation To The “Sperm Bank”/

Nice.

RUTHLESS

It's like im throwin stones at Freestyle's sports stadium, cuz I'm "rockin-yo-dome"//
Leave ya frame like a pocket-of-bones... u think your electrifyin? when really your "sockets-is-blown"//

nice.

Ruthless, work on the flow, don't worry about the multi's as much.. Good Luck to both..




P.S. Pleeease return the favor in my battle against MiC CheCk.. (it's in Elite)
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