ok, this was one of the best battles i have ever seen (since i have been here) and you guys totally blew me away. I hope that some day i can be as good as you guys. ANYWAYS my favorite lines were:

Ill:
i still remember my last words to him, they were the worst i ever said\\
he told me i was immature, i said i wished he was dead\\

Sand:
he showed his heart with a pen and never ceased.
and the emotion ran through his words like disease.

i liked both these but my vote goes to.............................. Ill Mental. I dont know what that other guy was talking about i think it is a very original story. Dont get me wrong i really liked sand, but there was just something in Ill's that madfe me lean towards him
VOTE: Ill-Mental