damn.. you told me to peep this when you posted it.. so I did and I'm glad I did.. I totally agree with my boy enigmatic, you started weak, but built up to a totally un-expected height.. "

"I’d rather roam the stage with no attachments
Verbs are advancements; metaphors are my only enhancements" <---------- it started to pick up here and that was an ill line on it's own..
The flow was perfection throughout, and the ending played out nice.. peace yo..

__________________