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Jee-You Knit?
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IP:
You had a few problems with flow, and rhyming, but it was good, I think that you should set up for it by have it happening a few times, and letting the mom not care. Good verse, I was wondering if you could peep mine, What it's for?
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=44567
Thanks a lot.
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