This was very hard to choose from being that both were very touching stories.. and also can happen in real life. Those are the best type of poems that are out there.
For overall vocabualry: Fgee
Best Insight: Fgee
Best Story overall: Dirty Boy
Metaphors: Fgee
Following the subject : Dirty Boy, Fgee you didn't take the suicide in your sleep subject.. you mainly had suicide

but my vote goes to Fgee.. he had alot more to his than Dirty Boy did