vote=blaze
Harder punches and better wordplay, I especially like the first metaphor with the contagious shit. You both need to elevate, and you can't afford to have filler with any battle with a maximum of 10 lines or less.
Jmista, you need to have some original punches because you used a stupid "yo mama" line in yours, and that shit is more played out than Michael Jordan.
peep this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=44784
Peace