FROM ONE YOUNG DUDE TO ANOTHER IT WAS OKAY.THE BEAT WAS GANGSTA BUT IN LYRICS WISE YOU NEED TO IMPROVE.YOU SHOULD HAVE A OLDER BROTHER OR SOMETHING THAT YOU CAN RAP YOUR RAPS TO BEFORE YOU RECORD.ANYWAY GOOD JOB I CANT TALK SHIT BECAUSE I DONT HAVE A MIC TO DROP ANYTHING YET.