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Old 05-08-03, 01:03 AM   #2
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Hm..........................................

this was defneitley a hot battle

13:
you had creative lines, but.... half your verse was open mic

some of the lines could have ben worded better:::

instead of:
'Amplifyin' The Cries Of Ur Beatin While Tappin For The Sounds Of This 'Mic Check'/Submergin U In Water Wit One Thousand Volts Of Power Causin Ur Tongue To Touch The Back Of Ur Neck

use:

Submergin U In Water Wit One Thousand Volts Of Power Causin Ur Tongue To Touch The Back Of Ur Neck
'Amplifyin' The Cries Of Ur Beatin While Tappin For The Sounds Of This 'Mic Check'/


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put the real Punch! at the end
it makes it harder

Mik Check:

you still running good multi's, and came with stronger punches:::

Vote: Mic Check

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Check had more "dissing" in his verse although somewhat general (not personal)........




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