yo man how can i improve this itz my first rap {peace}
IP:
ima just like a boulda i burn and kill/
i aint gona stop till u no im 4 real/
burn thow ur face like burning paper/
u no u wanna be scared i werse then vapa (vapa iz like da ardest person in ur area)
u no ur feelin me but u dont sea me,beleve me,uva mc~s dont c me/
u wouid nt wanna meet me/
my secend verse it getz werse nufin getz werse then this/
but no i aint got time 4 dat i just wanna ryhme and dat/
coz i ryhme wit such words peaple call me da dicshrnary/
i murder 21 line when im playin picshernary/
so anyways watch out i couid b cumin 4 u so u betta make sure ur in a badboy crew
i didnt have a lot of time plezzzzz rate me
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