Evolve:

now, peep this here.. have to say this & i think you should listen
your not that bad of a writer man............................................... ....
.................................................. ............. when all the ink is missing//

^^^
best line of the battle

Trif:
Fix your structure!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Your flow is impossible to catch reading lines 2 words lng...

plus: didn't see much nice-ness from you

Vote: Evolve