Ai yo.....for being ya first post....its ok.......but ya gone need alotta work girl....

Ya flow was choppy....it would rhyme for a line...then the next three lines didn't at all...

Go read open mics, battles, poetry, an write from ya heart...then keep postin drops like this to continue to elevate....I'm not hatin on a girl....just tellin ya keep droppin.....we all gotta start somewhere

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