Evolve gets my vote, you put a lot more work into your verse, and it showed.

dont worry, your secret is quiet as kept... trust me, i won't tell at all
that you dropped your verse & just like your career, it continues to fall//
^^Great Line^^

now, peep this here.. have to say this & i think you should listen
your not that bad of a writer man............................................... ....
.................................................. ............. when all the ink is missing//
^^Great Closer^^

All around, Evolve took this one.

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