ahhaha macgyver...ahha that cat is crazy...he built a detonator outta a toothpaste tube,clippers,a ribbon,and a battery...how he got all the eletricals to do it with those materials ill never know,i tried that shit allthe time,never worked....anyway back tothe rhyme,i though tit was a decnt rhyme mdb i didnt understand the line iwht the kungfu fighter nahmean...and bein called aghostwriter aint always a good thing nahmean,haha nah im jus playin with you dun...i liked this,a couple of lines seemed out becasue they were shorter then theones before,but its not hard to fix that shit nahmean...i thgouth maybe you lost your topic from the starting nahmean,you was talkin bout being pressured and shit,then calln yourslef the transperant andshit,sounding like a bit of a just straight spittin whats on your mind nahmean..nothign wrong with that...no doubt,was an aiigh tpeice...keep posting...
bismillah