Yo you got skill but i dont like it, not cos it's bad but the topic is kinda played and suicide isn't really a basis of a good piece unless you add a twist to it or sumin like Ex.- your girlfreind has written a suicide note, and you have to stop her from commiting suicide. jus rap bout the thoughts an' emotions in yer head at that time. you got skill though, but i wasn't feelin it (personal opinion though)

Goodluck in tha futre an shit
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