Ok...

Interesting stuff ya had there...

But, in your first line...
How is being original like night after day?
In my world, I see that shit all the time...

And then at the end of your first verse...

"Ya lyfe flashin b4 you like the start of another D-Day
Got that red shit pourin out you like a bitch on her period"

WTF is that?
It wasn't a rhyme.
Oh well, nice try...


Votes, people...
Throw them this way!

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