LMAO @ "This is my first real ill shit...it's about fat people"

I ain't even going lie, the topic was horrible. It was like really bad rendition of Fat Bitch by 50 Cent.

Since it's your first audio I wasn't expecting anything too great.. but yeah your quality needs some major work. You definatley need to get something like Cool Edit or Acid Pro for starters. Even if you have crappy hardware you should be able to squeeze something that's listenable out, although you might need mess around a bit to figure it out.

Mic presence and delivery need some work cause you sounded half dead and I couldn't really tell if you were on beat or not cause I couldn't hear the beat.

Keep up and you'll get better... Check
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=45247