I felt this shit dude, you had a seriously ill flow. The hook fit really nicely with the whole spit, which is good because a lotta cats post a hook that has nothing to do with their rhyme. The lyrics weren't about very much, just a basic battle-type track, but among those it was up at the top. Try to write about something other than how sick you are, because if you can pull of a nice topical piece everyone will know you're sick already.
Nice work
Peace

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