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Old 05-09-03, 09:12 PM   #25
cameronj86
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meta killed him with lines like
how you gonna challenge me mentally when you’re mentally challenged, that shits absurd, right?
That one don't even have to rhyme but it did, I also liked the "quality...kwelib" line and a pretty good closer
your verse was simply sacrificial so if any of those were you’re good lines then you should’ve saved ‘em//
cause I got abrasive like you’re mother’s pubic hairs when she forgets to shave ‘em//

West urs started off good but u just didn;t finsih of good enuff