Thread: the break up
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Old 05-10-03, 09:25 AM   #3
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i got your message ego..bt i thought maybe a couple of lines fell off the syllable placement nahmean,a real long line with a short one jsu tdidnt sound right for it,but its mad easy to fix no doubt,i liked this though,i understand your point and the message,i think everyone relates to shit like this,everyones met someone that wasnt righ tfor them no doubt...

i liked th ehook though,the singing coming into the rap was nice as fuck,i liked the rap part you did for the chorus too,it was nice...

peep somethign of mine sometime eh...bismillah
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