this was really quite good, a little long, but it told a good story. I liked how you played the part of the bomber, and yet you still seemed like a positive character, just doing what you could for the country. it had a heavy dramatic quality, but you lightened it up when the news caster said "they're in for a wholloping folks". Thats just hilarious. well, this had good vocab and a nice flow, most pieces with long bars lose their flow but you held it together.
really good work dude
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