tight beat. Sorry... I'm not feelin your flow. You got a decent vocab but im just not feelin it. The second mc was nice as shit tho. He got mad flow... mad props. But you need to plactice flowin wit the beat. It sounds like you tried to fit some rhymes in the song that you wrote without the beat. You should freestyle to da beat before you write so you can feel how your flow should go.

...Elevate

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