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Old 05-10-03, 03:25 PM   #6
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From: Somewhere uve never been born....
Re: a freewrite w/ Soultress

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Originally posted by evilbombsquad
but if no could win would there still be enough reason to get up and fight
in a world burdened with so many wrongs, can i be guilty foe being right
Guilt is merely an emotion created only to discriminate against our power
To show mercy is to fear, a blind inside having u live ur life as a coward
thats when despair hits as life stays still i begin to drift putting stale rhyme in motion
defying slogans of discrimination when connecting culture worlds apart like the ocean
I would send to you a part of my soul to comfort you in these times of need
But fear it would drown in this sea that separates us, no rhyme can connect it's greed [/font]



i really dig these lines.....very deep...great minds with talents when u put their ideas together...it would impact and produce such a perfect piece...i liked it a lot

hopin to read more of ur verses...keep em droppin!
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