Wasn't to bad. More poetry than a rap, but I can understand why you posted it in here.

Well, there wasn't a lot of emphasise on flow, but considering everything you were talking about, completely understandable.

The points you made, bang on. Exactly what a lot of people are thinking.

"The hatred of race because of their skin." - Good Line.

"The hatred of gays for who they fuckin'." - Good line as well. Not many would say something like that. Nice...

"How many lies to a nation can be bought?" - Excellent Line!

...Not to bad, not to bad...