Hey man...told you I'd peep your work, ...err sorry it took so long...you can yell at me *droops head in shame*

Well...

"i quit smoking trees how come every piece comes so sappy" - LoL, I liked that, good line

"not happy unsure where feelings and emotions stir themselves
i have confiscated all spoons hoping to finally cure myself."
Umm...Ok, the first line- oh so true, so true.
The second, I think I got it...Spoons stir?...right? If so...thats good...real good.

"old world found a new girl that became my world in only 2 weeks." - Really nicely worded, also, completely understand what your talking about...Christ sake, how much more am I going to quote, I'm going to be writing a lot here I think...(I quote as I read).

"im so scared shes no doctor only 16 with my heart in her hands." - Focking Good Line!!

Fuck the whole last like 4 or 6 lines were amazing as well, the flow, everything...great

Happy to see you happy Sand. Good piece, ...like I need to even say it :P

Keep it up dude, were still going to collab! ...I guess we need a new topic?...LoL