Well executed piece...

...really liked the way you got the reader right into the piece...using real vivid imagery and structuring of words...

...very nicely written....superb piece...

..resp...

PS

Could you reccomend Deacon to an Admin to be made a mod of this place?

Cos i aint on here as much as i used to be. And you have other boards to run too. And he could do a good job of this place.