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Old 05-11-03, 11:19 AM   #5
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Ay, Nice piece here. Much symbolism.
My favorite lines were:

>Stuck At Sea .... Of Emotions, Got Me Taking Knees On Moving Cement..
Thinking Of Home, A New Placed To Live, I Got WritersBlock For Rent..
Bullets Get Sent, Thru A Glass House .... They Are Peircing With Sound..
Bound To A Childs Knowledge, Blamed When An Abstrakt Worlds Found..

Stay up n keep elevatin.
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