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Old 05-11-03, 01:51 PM   #26
Wi11y Na$D@Q
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hmmmm this was hmmmm anyway peep it


MC- ur flow wasnt bad and u had couple lines that was decent, wordplay needs alil work. punches also ur disses was coo tho




quote-I'm scared to go to war? Dont make me ~call Cochrin~ /
And make another whiteboi retire /
Like ~John Stockton~ /


^^ lmfaoo thats not bad at all




quote-Any verse I write will ~rape your diss~ /
You aint ~made for this~ /
Go practice your ~skateboard tricks~ /

^ funny diss



the rest was blah 8mile and white rapper jokes are played, but other then that it was decent verse 5.3/10






Whiterap-hmmmm u had a very simple flow, choppy in sum parts punches was ehhh, wordplay needs work disses was that good lil to simple u should hav got at him harder. aint really feel it swwy 3.0


vote-MC