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hmmmm this was hmmmm anyway peep it
MC- ur flow wasnt bad and u had couple lines that was decent, wordplay needs alil work. punches also ur disses was coo tho
quote-I'm scared to go to war? Dont make me ~call Cochrin~ /
And make another whiteboi retire /
Like ~John Stockton~ /
^^ lmfaoo thats not bad at all
quote-Any verse I write will ~rape your diss~ /
You aint ~made for this~ /
Go practice your ~skateboard tricks~ /
^ funny diss
the rest was blah 8mile and white rapper jokes are played, but other then that it was decent verse 5.3/10
Whiterap-hmmmm u had a very simple flow, choppy in sum parts punches was ehhh, wordplay needs work disses was that good lil to simple u should hav got at him harder. aint really feel it swwy 3.0
vote-MC
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