yo pretty alright ya nahmean it started slow i thought, then picked up and tha rhyme scheme really got tight, then started puttin down rules which i thought was pretty ill then ya had a bit of a weak ending, tha last line was pretty good tho i just wasnt feelin tha couple lines b4 it

as far as audio goes it mostly depends on what beat and how u can spit it ya know, personally i only spit tha tights rhymes i can write to audio and try and make sure i leave no weak spots in content, but ya know if u can rock er u could get away with what i think is weak

neway i thought it was pretty good, do me a favor and tell me what u think bout my drop