OOh. I liked this a lot. Strong imagery and effortless flow made this a great piece. Very dreamy sort of vibe to it, nice capture of emotions also. I was most definately feelin it. My favorite lines were:

>tha blood of her kin s'been blended w/ angels,
bendin my mind, heart intwined w/ tha sight of her halo/

and

>obesinities, to divinty, for her tranquility,
if I leave this very instant will she remember me?/

Nice writin Pro, ill keep an eye out for more from you.
Pz.