Nice battle from both of ya's...

1-N-Gone: You had some goo punches...u coulda upped ur vocab...some of ur punches were original but too much. (crazy/whacky)

Blaze_2K4: You had betta punches than 1 but i think urs coulda flowed better....decnent structure too...

Close battle but my vote goes ta:
Blaze_2K4