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Old 05-12-03, 11:03 AM   #14
Kosta
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IP:

All your sins to me,let your love flow through them,
like a river of emotions, can't see what to do, when?/
mixing up potions of hateful fear, and lovingly drinking it all down,
swimming in oceans like amphibians proclaiming their antagonism/
except water is arsenic, poison staining a lace gown, leave me face down,


nice start...flow was so/so..but content
was very nice..sorry i dont have time
to break everything down. but it stayed.
consistent the entire. way. very good job.
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