this is old, very, but yo still give me feedback, i kno that the vocab aint the best, but yo, check it...

yo im BIZZARRE and i got PROOF of that cuz im SWIFTY
im a KONIVA and a KON ARTIS, cuz i rob quickly
i like to eat some EMINEMs cuz they fill up my belly
who owns the chocolate factory, WILLY WONKA or R.KELLY?
wanna kno how to be gay and not toss salad?
act like JA and ASHANTI n make ya money off of balads.
im really poor, i need to borrow 50 CENT
me n my crew robbed the fuckin U.S. Mint
now im like JIGGA and JD cuz money aint a thing
unlike CASH MONEY, dog i got no bling bling
we aint solo we rob in flocks like we sheep
gettin ur jewlery out the pawn shop like u MOBB DEEP
thanks tah NAS, im gonna be wat i wanna be
i got more welfare checks than the ODB
its dark out, damn dog, its black as night
im not SEAN PAUL but u can still gimme the light
i aint tryin to jack nobodys style wen i rap
im not BUSTA RHYMES, but i can still make it clap
me n SNOOP will go do a collabo today
my rhymes is sick, they sent me to DR. DRE
speakin of DRE, i aint tubby so dont call me BIG BOI
im short and stubby, this song makin me jump 4 joy
i think its funny, that i called out all these names
E-DUB wit KRYS n HENNEY bout to change the game
anybody who got beef, i take all they possessions
i robbed 1930, thats why we had a great depression
im a pro here to teach u amatures a lesson
my skills on the mic r truly a blessin
ill handcuff ya heart, lets call it cardiac arrest
E-DUB motherfuckers, we is the best...