Poetry is like putting your thoughts/emotions into a kind a form of art through writing. It depicts your thoughts and emotions in a way which flows or is vivid or using words that stand out, lines/parts that jump out to the reader...

...stuff like that...it goes on and on...hard to explain off the top of ones head...

..there's a fine line though...


Anyway, this swayed from poetry to not poetry in my opinion. You seemed to try and encave your words written fairly plainly, with poetry here and there...

...anyway, the meaning was strong, and depicted fairly well.

....though it did drag on a bit at times. And as i said, it was mostly words in a fairly plain format encaved in poetry here and there...

...anyway,

..resp...