Evolve...that was quite amazing.
“they had to...BREAK THE ICE” - ...Fuck...I...well I was razzled and dazzled by that.

“because just like life, love isn’t fair” – So god damn true.

“each tear represented each one of her lies
each moan equaled every guy she boned and let inside” – (aiight, I’m in class right now, reading this and voting...) *smacks Evolve in the back of the head* fucker...I was like “oh shit!!!” in class...look what you made me do ... so basically, fucking amazing lines right there.

Amazing song. Really.

Phrantik
You started off...meh, not so good, like I was thinking to myself in-between your verse’s ‘I think Evolve took this’.

But fuck...after reading it to the end...shhhit. Fuck! Now I don’t know who to vote for...Fuck Fuck Fuck Fuck!!!
God damn...alright...ummm...I’m going to Vote= Evolve. I would have been the same as Sand on this one, if it wasn’t for fact that lately I’ve had some troubles, the same shit with chicks...damn sluts. So I guess that’s the one deciding factor. It hit home.

Good work, both of you. Keep it up, pleeease!