Emotion is non-existant, and you got your flow is very simple. You need to work on your delivery, so you hit snares, or close to them. The most important part about a track, don't let anyone tell you different, is the syllable count you work with. The more you have, the faster, the less, the slower. You have to find the right mix for each beat, and each concept.

This is pretty basic, like you took textcee lyrics and tossed them onto a beat. You have to change your whole steez for audio.

Offbeat flow, and emotion, work on those two things. I mean, yea, beat is louder then it should be over the vocals, but that's small. Work on the big things and the small things will smooth themselves out with a little time.

It was aiight, but I wouldn't bump it on a playlist.

Reply back - http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=46095 - It's a battle, so if you can, try to quote lines, so I know you actually listened.