man, not bad.. fat people.. lmfao, you need better beats.. it was really shakey.. keep elevatin' yo.. it takes practice, trust I still suck. lol, beat needs to be a little louder, and your vocals need to be.. ummmm, get a better mic.. ne-way, keep 'em comin'
peace...
peep my ish
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=46173

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