.......too short,even thoguth it was an introduction,thats the length of my introductions an doutros on my shit...i cant say nohign abou tthis its,like how many abrs let me count....10 bars,thi sshits a quick battle verse ype lenght,not an open mic peice...my thoguhts....
i thoguht th erhyme was aiight though to b ehonest,it was mad simple,but no doubt i guess i have to let it go coz its obviously just a quick thing,but it flowed pretty good throught...need legnth cat,post a whole osng and ill critique it properly...

peep m drops...

zions and my idea of a quick verse...