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Originally posted by Atetrack define'
.......too short,even thoguth it was an introduction,thats the length of my introductions an doutros on my shit...i cant say nohign abou tthis its,like how many abrs let me count....10 bars,thi sshits a quick battle verse ype lenght,not an open mic peice...my thoguhts....
i thoguht th erhyme was aiight though to b ehonest,it was mad simple,but no doubt i guess i have to let it go coz its obviously just a quick thing,but it flowed pretty good throught...need legnth cat,post a whole osng and ill critique it properly...
peep m drops...
zions and my idea of a quick verse...
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Didn't know the protocol was an entire song
I didn't intend my first post to be all that long
Long like a snake it coils up before it strikes
Long like a 12 incher that every lady likes
Here is a sample, test it, run your exam again please
10 bars? I don't measure, just rhyme, follow ma steez?
Send somethin my way and show a rook how its done
Bend over sideways and do me some tricks, go on son!
I don't want no battles, what would that prove?
That I can only go ten lines before I lose all my groove?
Sing a song for 6 pence, Pocket full of rhyme
I keep my meessage clean with no dirt and no grime
Just tryin to release some pressure and do it with class
Attempt to remain smooth, polite, calm and not crass
What would make an entire song? How many lines would that be?
I have heard a million tunes with no more lines than the chorus+3
So here I go with something longer I hope this shit is better?
Something bigger, fatter, nicer to get your mamma wetter
For real tho, don't take me personal, I'm just gettin my flow on
I never claimed to be no pro or any type of lyrical words don
payce
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