well, this has an okay flow, and I liked how you rhymed the same sound a lot, but what I liked stops there. You need to work on punches if indeed you are trying to write a battle verse.Know that dazed and confused lines without wordplay are whack, yo mama lines are whack and played out, and using the word wanksta just pisses me off, I don't know why. You need to elevate vocab and try to use multis, and try to write verses that aren't the same as 90% of mainstream rap right now.
Peace

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