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Old 05-12-03, 08:16 PM   #4
Johnny 6-feet
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i think you went over board with multis and vocab and didnt focus enough on the topic at hand.

its obvious you got skills, its just a question of developing them in this case, if you'd spoke more on what your mother means to you it wouldve been stronger. although the multis and vocab wouldve been a great "spitting for the sake of spitting" piece.

keep posting.
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