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Old 05-12-03, 11:45 PM   #3
DaGyrlRemarqabL
..A New Breed of Femcee..
 
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^hate reps like that.

Sup nun...I was feelin this piece. Great execution of a well known concept. Nice flow and imagery, I felt like I knew the girl in some light. My favorite line was:

>jus turned the big 1-8- you should be thinkin bout college electives
instead youre debatin which products the better contraceptive

Its sad really. Nice piece, no doubt. Stay up, ill keep an eye out for more ofyour work.
Pz n propz.
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