yo dun this needs to elevate alot no doubt,but keep at it and youll get it,anyone thats dissing you or whatever,was bad at somepoint,and now they get comments they ill it goes to their head...dont get disheartened,the more poeple that get into this the better im sayin.if you ever need some help with osme shit jus tsend me a message ill be more then glad to help,even though my shit is strange in itself,but ill help you none the less...ill start a little now,you need to up your vocab seriously,and learnt to spill imagery,everyone likes imagery....and keepng your shit on flow can be hard but after a while itll its easy....for the peice ill give it a 4...you need to keep working on it,but as i said ,just message me im here most days,and i ain tsome cat that jus tpeeps shit and says its ill,ill actually read the shit....

retunr the favour dun on my zions peice.....