ok first no matter da beat is annoyin your flow is ok kind of basic like u wanna rap fast but aint got da hang of it lyrics are ok overall nice track ill give it 3 of 5 but i wouldnt listen to it normally maybe every now and den

second track
beat is better but sounds generic same as first track lyrics are nice u got skill u need to work on your presence a lil bit more tho id listen to dis one more i like it da beat is got me and your flow on dis one is better hook is ok keep it up kid nice drops peep my shit holla

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