It aint that borin but yeah the concept was kinda been used too much....but the fact that ur ideas evolve and stretched out , it made ur poem very nice to read....

i think its good but try to think of other stuff that would make it more interesting and not just the same ones like we read in each poem...props for nice vocabs and concept...

hopin to read more...

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